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Comment: Hi Ivan,I enjoyed your reflective journal 2 and this reflected journal did not disappoint me as well! I like your approach to the question, as you compared the two factors you were given, before coming to a conclusion of which you prefer, and how they can actually affect your life or the society. You are also proactive in researching for other sources and bringing in other examples like the part where you gave example showing how the Japanese approach the topic you were talking about, to strengthen your argument. Overall, I feel that this is a good piece of work done!
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Comment: Hi Jack, I like how you explicitly explained how these beliefs actually impacted your lives, and it may be because you have experienced more than many of us, and have more experiences to share. When I went to visit the other blogs, it is seen that many, including myself, cannot relate to the beliefs as well as you can. However, just a little question, I am puzzled over why you quoted your friend's post that he believes more in the Western perception of self than the Chinese perception of self. Is it a style of writing of yours, or did you feel like adding that in to show the contrast between your friend's point of view and your point of view? Overall, this was an excellent work!
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